I found that the writer seemed to be limited by the use of crayon writing. While she did shape a compelling argument, I felt that she could have went on and pushed her view about thinking outside the box and trying something new even further. This writing is definitely good. I completely agree with the approach she was trying to make. When one "lets go," the writing is more enjoyable than when it's all rigid and serious.
I really appealed when the writer stated that familiarity isn't always the best approach. If one writes in a different voice than he's used to, the audience will almost always appeal to the taste of a new recipe. Also, the color scheme of magenta and purple is soothing to the naked eye. Visuals definitely count, but it is vital to hear the voice.
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